Round 3 Scores



Round 3 - Beige and Brown Business

Another fantastic round, everyone, it was so difficult to find a winner this week. I noticed a few of you had the same shirt/bag this round and I didn't mark you down for that as the entries still looked individual. Perhaps if this comes into play again think about accessorising differently, add a hat, a scarf, gloves or something similar so it distinguishes yours from the others.

Comments by judges are optional, so some weeks different judges will choose to comment or not and that is their prerogative.  They have time constraints and commitments like we all do, but one at least will comment every week. The judges are there to encourage and give tips for improvement when they can.

We all see different things in your entries and that diversity to me is very beneficial. The comments are independent of each other and we only see each other’s when they are put up for me to organise. If you have any queries or issues or want to see a break down of the score criteria, please PM me.

**Click on the shots for a larger size if you'd like to see them closer**

Lasummerb with Ayana






Kallie
As soon as I saw your entry, I loved it. The plaid with the jacket and the bag all screamed class and sophistication. Absolutely loved the hair also. The triple gold jewellery chain was perfect for this round and just enough. Her makeup suited the whole “business-look”.She may have been a touch big in proportion to her background, but the composition looked fantastic, particularly how it was as sharp as Ayana and the colours all harmonised really well. The belt on the pants added that overall classy feel.



Avery

I love this so much. Ayana looks very classy and the hair is fantastic. This was probably my favorite outfit of the round. I will say that she looks like she would be really tall based on the size of the crosswalk bars, and there's a lit bit of jaggies on the pant legs, but really, really stunning entry!


NShippundenFan with Tiffany

Kallie
Love her outfit and the amount of jewellery was just enough for Tiffany’s outfit and classy appeal. Love the office background, only wish I could have an office like that at my school! It’s gorgeous. Tiffany’s makeup and accessories are suitable, and bring out the style and classiness of this round. She is a touch big when you look how close she is to the chair. She is almost in-line with the chair, which would probably go up to her thigh, where for proportion and type of office chair it should probably be closer to her waist or even higher looking at the style of chair and her head looks a little too close to the ceiling.



Avery

Wow, Tiffany really looks classy this round. She is really lovely😊 ! I love the pose and the background is really good for the brief! I will say that she still looks a bit too tall for the background, and a bit blurry, but I really love this entry from you. Also, the brief called for shades of beige and brown. While I think accent colors are fine, half of her outfit looks grey/black. Very well done😊!


Movotti with Diva

Kallie
Love the pose, the outfit looks ideal for a classy business woman. The satchel, the watch and the glasses brings together the whole “classy business” look. The in-game background suits the round, and the light, airy feeling and colours brings Diva nicely into focus. Her makeup and hairstyle looks perfect for this round.



Avery
This is amazing! Diva is so classy and stylish. I love the briefcase that you chose. I really love this look on her. I feel that the background is a little awkwardly cut and there is a little bit of blurring around her jacket. Overall nice job.


Gege with Haeju


Kallie
Haeju’s outfit is gorgeous and perfect for this round. Love the hairstyle and makeup is ideal for the sophisticated business look. Her jewellery looks stunning and you stuck to brief for her outfit perfectly. Her whole look oozes class and style. The background is suitable but I wasn’t sure whether she was in a train station or a subway. The composition is gorgeous, however and if the background was as sharp as Haeju, this would have upped her points somewhat.


Avery
Amazing and I think that your outfit was quite different from the rest. Haeju definitely stood out in a good way. I love that hair, too! I like the idea of her being a busy woman at a metro station, but the background is so out of focus that I had to look a couple of times to make sure that's what it was. I know that moving trains would be blurry, but the rest is a little out of focus, too. This is one of my favorites of this round!

xjojox with Taruna

Kallie
Taruna’s makeup is gorgeous, as is her jewellery and accessories. I love the leopard print skirt, and how you dressed it up with the jacket, but to me a leopard-skin is a bit more casual. Perhaps a leather or linen pencil skirt may have brought up the classiness of the shot. The city background is suitable but the quality of the background compared to Taruna’s sharpness doesn’t really gel as well as it could. It’s a bit hard to tell too if she’s in the middle of the road or on the footpath. The car looks as if it may knock her over. I like the idea of the phone, but the pose really doesn’t lend itself to the mobile phone in this shot.

Avery
I love how you followed the colors of the brief, but still managed to find a pattern that stood out on the skirt. Lovely entry!

Lovegab101 with Ariel
No show this round

TexasTwangTonya with Chantel

Kallie
I love everything about this shot, her outfit, accessories, the pose and her makeup are all perfect for this round. Absolutely love the backgrounds it is as sharp as Chantel, and the warm golden aura of dusk and the lights really add to this overall shot. I can’t really find anything I don’t like about this shot. So gorgeous! Perhaps the only thing would be if you'd found a scarf or something to go with the shirt, it would have given it a different look to the others.

Avery
Chantel is really pretty here! I love the outfit, it looks very flirty, but not revealing. I know that you didn't realize that you used the same shirt, but you also used the same bag as another entry. The only thing different about the outfit was the skirt, really. I know Jen said that using the same shirt is fine, but if you had accessorized it differently I think it would have helped it stand out more. I'm not sure how "business" the background is, but it is lovely. Your editing is really good this round! The only suggestion I would make would be to move her closer so that her hair didn't blend with the roof so much. Very cute entry!


Lisabee2 with Aspen

Kallie
I really like that you took an alternative pose for this round. Aspen looks like she’s the boss of the office and sitting her on the desk adds to that status. The glasses add to her classy, business look. A few edges around Aspen’s outline could be rectified by using a small sized blur brush or gone around her outline with the clone brush as this also smooths out those edges nicely. The brief asked for a bag as one of the requirements, which you didn’t add. Remember if you see that you’ve missed something after you have put your entry up in the round, you can edit right up until the last due date.

Avery
I really like how simple and classy this outfit is. Aspen looks great with the glasses, too. The jewelry is gold, but you forgot the bag/satchel requirement! The background is perfect, but there are a lot of jagged edges around Aspen. Overall, a very awesome entry!


JennaCatz with Peyton

Kallie
The whole aura of this shot, the clean lines and that touch of nature through the gorgeous large windows. Her outfit looks lovely, and contrasted nicely to her hair and glasses, but I would have liked to have seen a bit more contrast in her outfit, added a brown bag or top or trousers would made this shot even more attractive. Is this an in-game shot?  Because the editing and proportions are perfect in the overall picture. Well done and so glad you are back online.

Avery
Peyton really looks classy this round! I think that the monochromatic look is chic, but I feel you could have used a darker bag to make it stand out a little more. I think that this is one of the best looks I have seen on Peyton in this comp! I think that the editing and proportions are really well done, too!


Ashlenn with Leslie
Kallie
Leslie’s whole appearance. Her pose and hairstyle, along with her makeup and accessories were perfect for the “classy, business” look. I am not sure if the skirt is the required colour it looks white to me and the brief asked for beiges, browns, creams and ivory colours. So unless it’s just the lighting and the skirt is an ivory colour, (which is the closest colour to white compared with the other colours in the requirements), it doesn’t show up well here. Her shirt is a little casual compared to everything else she is wearing, but, regardless of that minor detail, it all works together to give a great look. Love the background, but Leslie looks a tad big proportionately to the doors and ceiling.


Avery
I really think that Leslie looks stunning here! She almost looks like some "office girl" in a music video than an actual professional, though. I do like the color combinations, but I would have liked to see a tad more brown to fit the brief. I do like the background a lot. It screams "office" but it sill has artistic elements. Very well done!




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